英语~以下内容能再委婉一点客气一点的表达吗Iconsultedwiththepersoninchargeofourcompany,andwecanonlyallowyouthemosttotake9piecesIfthereisaproblem,pleasedirectlycontactwithMrKimYoucancometoourfact

Question

英语~以下内容能再委婉一点 客气一点 的表达吗
I consulted with the person in charge of our company ,and we can only allow you the most to take 9 pieces
If there is a problem,please directly contact with Mr Kim
You can come to our factory on this Thursday .

Answer 1

I consulted with the man who take charge of this,you can take 9 samples at most.
If there‘s any problems,please contact Mr.Kim directly.
You can come to our factory this thursday.
(tomorrow?!这个时间可以再具体一点,尽量精确到小时,如果可以的话,也请说明到时候过来需要要联系谁)