帮我看看这段对ateens的英文介绍有什么语法问题?FromSweden'sA-Teens(AbbaYouthGroup)iscomposedofMarieSerneholt(Mary,17yearsold),AmitPaul(Ai-Ming,17yearsold),SaraLumholdt(Sarah,16yearsold)andDhaniLennevald(Dan

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帮我看看这段对 a teens 的英文介绍有什么语法问题?
From Sweden's A-Teens (Abba Youth Group)is composed of Marie Serneholt (Mary,17 years old),Amit Paul (Ai-Ming,17 years old),Sara Lumholdt (Sarah,16 years old) and Dhani Lennevald (Dani,16).
The first song ,‘Mamma Mia’.It only took a week to break sales records in Sweden.
I like their song,‘fire fly’.It comes from their album ,《teen spirit》.They released this album in 2001.

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第一段没有问题.
第二段那句话有comma splice的问题,是一个断句.
应改为：their first song,"Mamma Mia",only took one week to break the sales record in Sweden.
(注意我把it去掉了,不然是错误的）
第三段有小错误.
你确定是fire fly还是fireflies?(不是owl city的fireflies)
还有最好用 they have released this album since 2001.
保持整段都用同样的时态.你前面用了现在时,后面却用了过去式.最好不要这样使用.如果在SAT上怎么写,会被扣分的 :)